Wednesday, 16 April 2014

April 16 - Onomatopoeia


Onomatopoeia =  words which imitate sounds of objects or actions

Click here to see  how to pronounce this massive word!

Sounds of words are important in poetry since poems are meant to be read aloud. Try using sound words in your poems to create interest.

Here are some examples of sound words:
snap     crackle     pop     sizzle     rumble    thump   bang     swoosh 

This poem uses onomatopoeia to create vivid images. It is from the book How to Write Poems:  Pin Your Ideas To The Page! by Wes Magee. 

The Waterfall

Over rugged rocks
the waterfall tumbles
            and rumbles.

In winter
it gasps, groans,
           and grumbles.

But in summer it's quiet.
It just whispers
           and mumbles.

Try brainstorming sound words for the following:
- loud noises
- quiet noises
- animal noises
- sounds at school
- sounds at night
- sounds in the park
- sounds at the beach

If you are stuck check out this list of sound words to help you write your poem. 

Here is my attempt at a sound poem - I found this style quite challenging!

The Lake
by Kelly Flasha

Crunching across hot rocks
Leaves rustle in the breeze

Water laps at the dock 
Boards creek under feet

Swish, splash!
In the water at last.




14 comments:

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  2. I hear tapping from the raindrops,
    A boom from the thunder,

    Crack from the lightning,
    And the lightning zipping through the sky,

    Blowing from the heat vent,
    And trees wobbling through the air.

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  3. Patter, patter tiny feet
    Scuttering across the roof
    Ahoo! Wolfs howling outside
    Tears running down my window

    That is drops hitting the roof
    Wind is whirling around
    That is rain on the window
    It is rain I love so much

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  4. the forest

    chirp chirp goes the bird in the trees
    boom the tree as it falls crash!(3

    whoosh goes the wind in the branches
    drip drop goes the rain


    howl goes the coyote in the forest
    ribbet goes the frog in the pond









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  5. Rain
    Droplets of water
    come down from the sky

    How does this happen?
    Or do you know why?

    I would tell you right now
    but sadly I can’t

    I am leaving this to you
    Now I am ending this poem

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  6. I hear the slourp! of a lick of ice cream
    swosh! of the waves
    pop! of a umbrela
    bong of a ball
    weare am I?

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  7. The city

    Stomping across sidewalks
    Zooming down the road

    People talk. Blah blah blah.
    And street vendors yell: hot dogs! get your hot dogs here!

    Many people eating now. Crunch, crunch.
    And that's a day in the city.

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  8. In the wind they squeak and rustle
    In the winter they moan and groan
    Trees

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  9. Fluffy bunies

    kabooooom exploding
    bang a gunshot

    swish a flash flood
    krackel a forest fire

    these are the sounds before death

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  10. seasons

    The birds chirp
    very hot
    It's summer

    leaves rustle and fall off the trees
    getting colder brrrrrrrr
    It's fall

    let's go sled down the hill
    weeeeeeeee!
    It's winter

    the rain is falling
    pitter patter
    It's spring

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  11. weds april 2014

    where the river goes
    splish splash the river goes
    I hear a sound and it sounds
    like this woosh i think it’s the wind
    pushing the water that go's

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  12. the bell goes ding dong
    the birds go tweet
    the gong goes goong
    the people say sweet

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  13. water crashes with a boom
    I feel the spray in my face
    It supplies lots of water
    niagara
    falls

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  14. Boom ,Boom a volcano starts to erupt
    sssss, lava sissling the trees
    ahhhh, you can hear the people yelling

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